Narrative Assessment - Literacy - 22 Oct 2015

Learner: Jiani        Learning Coach: Stephanie Hooker             Date: 22 Oct 2015

Learning Area: Literacy - Writing

Learning Observed

Today Jiani chose to write about our school opening. She set to work readily and expressed her thoughts and ideas with ease.

Evidence of learning

Jiani was able to write simple sentences with conjunctions. She is beginning to use adjectives in her writing.

Key Competencies/Vision Principles

Managing Self - Jiani settled to work quickly Use Language, Symbols and Texts -  She is capable and writes fluently Thinking - Her ideas were in sequence

Next Learning Steps

Include more detail and descriptive words in her writing Re-read and edit her story for correct tense (I am excited/I am exciting, Mum and Dad are coming/is coming)